Cover article draft analysis

Although I was fond of the production of the article, it consisted of many major flaws that greatly diminished the quality of the article. These flaws consisted errors with punctuation and grammar, incorrect vocabulary for the register of the target audience (the article was far too informal to pass for an article targeted at an older audience, and a greater deal of standard english would be necessary and appropriate to make it work). Another major issue was the fact that the article itself was far too short and felt very underwhelming and incomplete, therefore more Q&As will be needed in order to make the article a success. I will address these errors in the next draft of the main article, and allow it to become one step closer to being final and complete.